[SVTADAM]

Looks ok. Watch those compression fittings. Those have a tendency to leak after time. That is why it is illegal to use compression line splices for brake lines. If you flared the line for the fitting, that would be best. Not saying that this wont work, but just keep your eyes on it.

On a side note, why didnt you try and relocate the line alltogether? Using flexible hose you could have extended the line a bit and run it out of sight.